It all Started when when one night I was getting ready for bed. I was brushing my teeth when I heard a small growl coming from my room. I thought it was just my cat until I heard it again but more louder. I walk down to my room with my eyes barely open. I was so terrified. I opened the door and my eyes fully and i could see nothing at all so i jumped up onto the bed and got all comfy. Until I heard a rumble Coming from beneath my bed. I grabbed my teddy And held it for as long as I could. ‘’Grrr’’ ‘’ ahh who's there’’ the monster reaches its big furry scaly hands. Don't be sceard of me says the big hairy monster ‘’what you can talk’’ yes i can with a frightened voice. Yes I can talk now go back to sleep and don't worry about me.
The next day. I woke up and ran straight to mum. MUM MUM THERE IS A MONSTER UNDER MY BED ‘’ don't be so silly’’ ugh mum come look there is a monster. I opened the door and went down on my knees and looked under my bed but there was no monster no nothing. I was so shocked. My mum just laughed “you must have been dreaming darling” but i wasn't mum i swear there was a monster RIGHT UNDER MY BED well i'm going for a walk see you soon hun. Ugh what but. Byee. 6 hours later I got ready for bed and looked under my bed. Omg there you are your back. Why did you leave. my mum probably thinks I'm an idiot. He didn't reply. Well i guess he doesn't want me to tell anyone. well i guess it just a normal thing now. THE END.
kia ora taya I loved the writing you did how long did it take you to write?
ReplyDeletealso I noticed you did not use speech marks maybe next time you could.